Angel of Death

Diane "How was school today?" I was sitting at my desk, doing the little bit of homework I had, when my mom suddenly appeared in the doorway. Her red hair ...

I call stone but I'll finish it later. ~Angel

lily-pads are to a pond as dirt is to the ground

Hey KJ, thanks for PMing me! This was intense and it was another lovely chapter but there were a few things... “Honey, what are you thinking about?” Mom asked me. ...

Thanks for the review Sela but I don't think I'm going to finish this. Its been written a long time ago and the idea has been abandoned but if I ...

Diane The rain had stopped coming down after sixth period. When everyone was inside, the tears from the sky fell steadily until it disappeared into the blistering sun. As we ...

Hey Ash, I read this earlier but I didn't get a chance to review so here I am. I think this was a perfect next installment. I already knew that ...

Hey KJ! Thanks for the heads up, I liked this. Though it was a little rusty. My friends called in annoying. It should be 'My friends called it annoying' The ...

Hey Ari, Wow, I haven't read anything of yours in a while. How are you? Well anyways, I loved this. I'm not good at critiquing grammatical things but I will ...

Whew! Glad to know that it wasn't bad. Thanks for the review chichi. Very helpful. I'll add more descriptions and fix the mistakes. Thanks for reading, ~Angel

Thanks for the heads up, Ky! This was another great chapter and it was way better than your last, which is bad, because now I have to wait for Chapter ...

Note: I haven't written fantasy in a really long time so bare with me. I don't know if I'm going to stick with this because I have so many other ...

Wow, this was great. I actually was wondering how you were supposed to write these type of letters. So now, when I get ready to send in my manuscript I ...

Hey again! Okay, to be honest, I think the introduction to this chapter can be improved. I didn't read the whole thing, because I'm a little pressed for time but ...

Hey, its me again! I saw your profile and I just thought that I'd check this out. Here's one thing that I found that needs to be fixed immediately. Its ...